Open Poetry #10 |
Hold Me |
peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Hold me in one long embrace The strength of your arms is my haven Your merest touch causes me to tremble I cannot catch my breath!!! How I long to hold you closer yet How I wish for that sweet consumation Your voice as it whispers my name More tender than a prayer My pulses race at the look in your eyes My world is being in your arms Hold me tight, even for just one night And our dreams will be fulfilled. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ This is beautiful! -SEA |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cute poem here. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A beautiful image is formed with this. The beauty of love is brought to life. Ron |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thanks to all for the kind words...I'm working on it Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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