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peppermint35
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0 posted 2000-10-24 08:19 PM


Hold me in one long embrace
The strength of your arms is my haven
Your merest touch causes me to tremble
I cannot catch my breath!!!

How I long to hold you closer yet
How I wish for that sweet consumation
Your voice as it whispers my name
More tender than a prayer

My pulses race at the look in your eyes
My world is being in your arms
Hold me tight, even for just one night
And our dreams will be fulfilled.




Peppermint
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1 posted 2000-10-24 09:30 PM


P35~ This is beautiful!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-24 10:03 PM


Cute poem here.  


[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 10-24-2000).]

Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-10-24 10:18 PM


A beautiful image is formed with this. The beauty of love is brought to life. Ron
peppermint35
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4 posted 2000-10-25 06:08 PM


Thanks to all for the kind words...I'm working on it

Peppermint
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