Open Poetry #10 |
The Court Of Love |
Arabian Knight Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 16Saudi Arabia |
The first time I came close to you... my life was filled with love so true the roses bloomed ..the sparrows flew the first time I came close to you But after meeting that first time my heart accused me with the crime... of wasting years of life so prime... before I met you that first time Inside the court of love I sit my heart demands that I admit... a crime that I did not commit inside the court of love I sit My heart addressed my lip and eye... as witnesses to testify... and clarify and certify... my heart addressed my lip and eye My eye declared life was begun... the day I saw the shining sun... inside your eyes I saw it run my eye declared life was begun My lip had only one regret... that years were lost before we met before that kiss i won't forget my lip had only one regret To prove my guilt they both persist their testimonies both insist the arm of law they tried to twist to prove my guilt they both persist I begged my heart to not oppress the innocence that I profess how can the innocent confess? I begged my heart to not oppress I told my heart I understand but that was not a path i planned our destinies are what command I told my heart I understand Then after thought my heart agreed my innocence was then decreed and from this charge my hands were freed when after thought my heart agreed My heart and I forgot the past and hoped the days of love will last although with you they run so fast My heart and I forgot the past [This message has been edited by Arabian Knight (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Arabian Knight, A very wonderful expression of your talents. Well done. "My eye declared that life begun... the day I saw the shining sun... inside your eyes I saw it run" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Arabian Knight-This was very heartfelt and beautiful. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this a lot. Very expressive, and interestingly composed. Sandra |
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Arabian Knight Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 16Saudi Arabia |
I appreciate your encouragment.. and relish the joy of pleasing ur tastes.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
have read it twice, it moved my heart, beautifel penned. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
arabian Night, well penned poem. I loved the repeat line at the end of each verse Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flowing of words...I too hope your days of love will last...James |
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Arabian Knight Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 16Saudi Arabia |
Charisma and Kethry.. thanx for ur comments.. James.. i wish u the same... |
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