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Fantasy Screen To Love
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Fantasy Screen To Love We've never met, we've never touched So why do I burn for you quite so much There's been no kisses or lips of fire Still your words send me soaring higher No feathering breath, no fingertip trace Nothing physical which heats the frantic pace No reason at all for this strange state I'm in For surely being in love can't truly be a sin We've never spoken, but I know your voice I hear it in my soul I have no choice You pick me, flip me and spin me all around Within your arms for sweet heaven I'm bound Each night you weave your entrancing spell Without you my love I'm in a personal hell The fantasy of a love so real and true I've finally found it, discovered it in you Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Love has a way of finding us in any means, and thank God for it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ I'm gonna have to call you Mushy Marsha  Just kidding.......  This is very sweet......I sure hope you two hook up soon!  -SEA |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Marsha, I enjoyed this poem very much, and can relate to it. Thanks Jon |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, I don't think this is mushy at all, but it is romantic. I love it. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Virtual love can be real sweet, with sensual sensitive words to treat, they pick you up in a heavenly flight, to spend some time on cherish height, soft whispering words filling the air, sweet virtual love is what we share. loved your poem, and I can relate on that one. Take care.....Charisma |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
i've known that feeling..Love at first write. With just a word, without a touch, With sight unseen, I’ve been moved so much. I hear your whispers, so soft, so sweet, each waking moment and each night I sleep. They come to me like a song carried on a breeze, Winding through my thoughts, setting me free. Free as a bird, soaring and gliding above, you’ve freed my heart, freeing my love. From the darkness and sorrow, in which it always hides, And because of your love, there’s only one thing to give, I will give you my heart each day that I live. Ron |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love can be found in the strangest places but when it hits it can take ahold really strong. Wonderful write. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I feel it!!! I love it!!! And I know it can come true Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kathleen, yes it does, doesn't it. And I do thank God, oh indeed I do.  SEA, Mushy, me? Yes you're probably right, I've sort of melted, from inside out! And as to hooking up, well so do I love, so do I? Jon, I'm glad you liked it Kethry, Bless your heart, romantic? Yes that too, it's all that stardust in my eyes. Gives me a brand new view Charisma, thank you love, did you go searching for all these poems of mine? Well I thank you for rooting around for them and for being such a kind reader. Ron, Thank you, what a lovely poem, maybe not love at first write, more Love at first Byte Mark my friend and kindest critic, I thank you. It's certainly taken a firm hold of me, and it's definitely a thrilling ride, even if a little bumpy at times. But wow is it worth it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Peppermint, you must have slipped in while I was replying. I'm glad it brought a smile to you, it did didn't it, I thought so! Of course it can come true, and it does, it does! Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marsha-- this made me S M I L E! thank you for submitting a beautiful and lovely poem! as always your writing touches me deep within. and i always feel good after reading something which you've wrote. no matter where we find love, or how it develops...love is love, the most precious gift on Earth. hang onto it tight and never let go my friend! take care, amy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, you are so nice, and so talented. I'm constantly touched by your work it is, as I've said before, honest and beautiful. I'm glad this made you smile, and wherever love is found, and in whatever disguise she is, she is worth anything to keep. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marsha, I understand this feeling, you've captured it well. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Gemini, Thank you, and I'm glad you understand the feeling, because it's wonderfully uplifting isn't it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yep you caught the feeling perfectly |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, thank you most sincerely, you know I love your work, so a compliment from you is of real value. Which I appreciate and shall treasure. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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