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the memories in lint ...
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the memories in lint ... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
the memories in lint ... i put an old pair of pants on yesterday burns holes rips and lint the ones i thought i'd never again see change in the pockets jangling grocery list fit snug in the back burns holes rips and the memories in lint M.A. Miller 10.23.00 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MA Miller~ I can relate to the feelings that go with this.......great write.  -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Miller, I liked this Coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yeah...what memories can be found in the pockets of those old jeans...very nice write Mark |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
SEA, Coco, Paula ... thanks for reading ... a simple tone is capturing my muse once again ... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is one of the most original poems I've read this evening! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thank you Irish Rose ... original is not a word a poet hears very often ... thank you once more ... |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
M.A. I believe simplicity suits you well. This is good writing. Rainydays |
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