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Can't feel the love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Dark, wet tears threaten to drown me tonight. I can't sleep, can't read, nor even write. The hole in my heart feels larger for no apparent reason. Cold and vicious premature winds of winter feel like a personal attack. There is a sad thing stuck in my throat, It won't go away. I want my life back.. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Terribly sad. I too, have those days. ------------------ ------------------ The hole in my heart feels larger for no apparent reason. ------------------ There is a sad thing stuck in my throat, It won't go away. ------------------ ------------------ Beautiful, yet sad poem. I hope you're all right. Much love all, Krissie |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
this is so sad, I hope its just a former feeling and not something happening right now. I wish you well. hang in there. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sometimes it feels as if you can drown in the pain...your writing is so intense when you draw on this pain...I understand the pain and hope that you can also find the healing within the touch of your poetry. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
This poured out with such emotions, sending a smile your way  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ To feel such intense pain is to know it's time to let it go. 'I want my life back..' Reach out and take it back ! You can and you will ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
God have I been there, well done CatalinaMoon! "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Let it all out Cat and in the morning you will have just a little bit more of your life back...one day at a time...excellent display of your emotions...sorry sadness is visiting you right now...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm huge hug))) can relate on this, we all have sometimes such day's like this. exellent penned. Take care hon....Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this I can feel, I am posting a poem for you catalinamoon...huggzz to make you feel better... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sandra..HUGSSS....You know im here for you anytime you want to talk.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
seize it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm with Kathleen, you have to take your life back. . . and don't let it go. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
LIKED IT!!!!!!! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wonderful words, from you....always Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Can I be president of your fan club? I am your biggest fan. You truly do touch my heart with your poetry. I am a poet groupie.....lol ..beth |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just a quick hello, and thank you to everyone who has responded, you are all wonderful, and my heart is warmed by the special people I have met here. I would like to thank everyone individually, but I'm afraid I would get repetitious. I do appreciate you all. Sandra |
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