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A page from the journal...Of an insomniac gone mad ...4:54am.
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A page from the journal...Of an insomniac gone mad ...4:54am. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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A page from the journal... Of an Insomniac Gone Mad... 4:54am... a sweep of darkness covered me this morning chilling the room cooling the embers that slowly burn within the soul touching a place I've closed off to myself to everyone who claims they know or understand they couldn't it's madness complete and unforgiving control or lack of that drives this force flames flicker and I fan them giving until the last breath dies and still it cools and still it fades the white ash disappearing falling out of my grasp where is the peace now how could it be so lost when it was held so close guarded loved and nurtured don't try to make sense of me or see if you can erase the shadows they belong to me like the madness my strength weakens nothing fades nothing erases all..... of me Snow 4-26-00 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Whew, I'm not saying I empathise with this but boy can I relate.Powerful write. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Neve, This piece always strikes deep. Pausing to consider each word, it never loses its potency. You diverse talents shine through in its delivery. Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Shared in the tortured reassurance of lost tranquility. Very powerful piece from you. Loved it much. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Kethry, thank you very much. Robert Joseph, from you that means a lot to me. thank you! Mark, Thank you! Your comments are appreciated very much! snow |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Snow.....beautiful artistry from you on my monitor today. The brevity of words brings forth the power even more. Thank you....I look forward to reading more of your work! JULIE I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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