navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » in waiting
Open Poetry #10
Post A Reply Post New Topic in waiting Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855


0 posted 2000-10-23 02:32 AM


The wedding invitation is on the floor.
Pictures of girls hang on the door.
I know neither tonight nor any night before.

So when's after? Who wouldn't want it more?


© Copyright 2000 MPC - All Rights Reserved
Rainydays
Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324

1 posted 2000-10-23 09:55 AM


As in, "Happily ever...?" I'm not entirely certain there exists such a plane. I probably haven't interpreted this correctly, but I wanted to let you know I read and was (and am) intrigued by your words. Any more?  

Take care,
Rainydays

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-10-23 10:14 AM


As in, happily ever after?  I'm looking for it too.  But I tried once, rewriting my life happy.  It was a boring story without me in it...lol....love ya mike.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » in waiting

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary