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Open Poetry #10

the final so long

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2000-10-02 11:18 PM

and then i kissed her
and the world fell into place.
of course, she's no longer here,
but i can imagine her face.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-02 11:28 PM

Mike~ You are melting my heart. This is gorgeous.

-SEA

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2000-10-02 11:38 PM

bsquirrel,

You say so much with so few words.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

3 posted 2000-10-02 11:43 PM

So simple yet so much said.

Garfield

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-10-03 01:03 AM

I am speechless. Without words. Nothing. Zip. Nada. Null and Void. Oh...dem was woids? Well then, since I've screwed it up anyway, let me just add, exquisite!!!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2000-10-23 03:29 AM

simplicity often says so very much....

hugs, dg

my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2000-10-23 09:47 AM

Heartbreaking

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