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Another You
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Another You (Today I heard this wonderful old ‘chestnut’ on the radio – and by coincidence tonight I read ‘deer’s latest ballad on the same theme – I can’t help myself – I too must try my hand) The Original: (full title: There Will Never be Another You) There will be many other nights like this, And I’ll be standing here with someone new, There will be other songs to sing, Another fall, another spring. But there will never be another you. There will be other lips that I may kiss, But they won’t thrill me like yours used to do, Yes, I may dream a million dreams, but how can they come true, If there will never ever be another You. My effort: I’ve met so many in all my years of life Kissed quite a few, even made two my wife No one has captured my heart quite the same I was simply reading, I’ve only myself to blame You wrapped me with tears, filled me with laughter Warmed my heart with joy, gave my soul its rapture So what would I do if I ever lost you? I know already I’d always be blue Another you? Never! You have my heart If I lost you from me it would part All the sun in my life, and the moon as well My days in darkness forever I’d dwell So kiss me my sweetheart, give me my life With a glorious hug we’ll abandon all strife < !signature--> We cannot tell what may happen to us in the strange medley of life. But we can decide what happens in us... how we can take it, what we can do with it [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sir Poet Bill* I do love it when you weave from your heart, few can do it as fine as you do. This was beautiful~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Wilfred, You writing has the desired effect that you were looking for. You tried your hand and came up with a beauty. Nicely done, Wilfred. Bill |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Throw you a morsel of inspiration and you run it to the top ! Which is right where this one is going !  *Isn't that Balladeer a great inspiration ? Yep ! That he is !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
good read, so unabashedly bumping it back up... well done, Mr. Yeats! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wilfred.... This is one of my most favorite songs....I love to sit and play this on my keyboard along with I'll Be Seeing You, and Someone To Watch Over Me. I love to sing them!! So, of course, I was thrilled to see this posting and your beautiful writing!! Such wonderful words from you....  Follow your dream! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--this is beautifully done...you do write love songs so well! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a song! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
BDC- With admirers like you - I must take the words in small doses - to keep my ego at bay - Thank you Bill- Good Morning - your words are so kind - thank you. Marge - There is no comparison - deer is a champ - I didn't really 'see/read' his poem until after I'd begun my effort - Yet I could not ignore the beauty of his words. Karilea- I love having fans like you around  (gonna go bump you when I finish this reply )Sunny - 'Someone to watch over me' is one of my favorites to play too along with many others of that era (breeze and i - little white lies etc. ) Thank you so much for reading/respondingMartie- Love songs? - hey it's easy when you're in love ~S~ Irish Rose- see? that's what you miss being so young ! - yes - a great song - (not my poem )Thank you |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well Bill.., At least you can be sure of one thing... They'll never be another you. best wishes.... that's a real.... LOL dale < !signature--> Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb Sir. . . reminding us that there are no others. . . just the one that we love. . . Well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is so very lovely |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, you did it again took some old words and made them sing you pull on the chords of my heartstring and soon all those words with melody ring what can I say but applause, applause I hope your writing never has pause. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Wilfred, No matter what expect from you, you always deliver, often surmounting my anticipations! ~ All the sun in my life, and the moon as well ~ Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Thank you for this. ~ Beth |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Wil A superb effort ((BRAVO)) I loved your piece...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Wil A superb effort ((BRAVO)) I loved your piece...well done Tracie~< !signature--> OOPs please forgive me, I go too fast my computer goes to slow and this is what happens when you're impatient Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply beautiful Wilfred!!!! Bonnie |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Too many wonderful heartwarming responses - as I sit here - with a new idea bubbling in my brain - Let me just say thank you from the bottom of my heart to all of you |
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