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Adam's apple
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Adam's apple |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Adam's apple She hung from the tree Like Adam's apple Alluring inviting Enticing to see. Danced in the breeze In hues of red To bite, to bed Or to tease. And my coffee listed Poured and blistered Spilling at The fantasy. When the apple exploded With dapple force Covering me With apple sauce. Well what did you expect sex? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL...well I was hoping   me likes me applesauce spicy ya know *winkiewinkie* your rhyme is sweet as apple pie Sy-guy ALA-MODE later-apple of my eye-gator *L* me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is Fantastic......I like apple sauce too! -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'm going to miss you terribly. Take care LOve Sy Sea, Thanks for the fantastic. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Well, aren't we saucy this fine evening ? Now how 'bout them apples ! LOL ! Loved it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL! Excellent Seymour! Much enjoyed this ... thanks for the smiles!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Seymour, this is clever. Quite provocative, but "tastefully" so. Thank you. Rainydays |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
did you find the apple..? Good work my friend. I have to tell you.... (Clever) Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Saucy, saucy. *L* Kit, You welcome and thanks for the read. Rainydays, Glad you enjoyed. Lucky, Thanks for the clever. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
reminds me of an old story having to do with a pressure cooker...and if I lend this thought to you, what would you do with it!? This was great! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cute and yes..I agree with the above..Clever. Love the ending. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, So cute friend, you made my night, thanks. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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