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The Tithing's Of The Tempest Bell
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Kaiyu-1 New Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 1 |
The Tithing’s Of The Tempest Bell We now live in a world of our own making, testing levels of endurance to crash and burn, everyone, everything; its all for the taking? Lest we forget the point of no return. We’ve cranked it up; full speed ahead, no thought to: everything in its time? more Money, Power, things manifested. All in moderation remains oblivious to the mind. Our own golden rule has taken a drive too. We are the cause and effect of one another. Its; Do unto others before its done to you. Our very essence we stifle and smother. When genocide of the spirit we sport with finesse, physical genocide is a deplorable crime. How much DEPTH can be perceived in our shallowness? How great the abyss we’ve created in our time. "Cannot" we see: what we’re doing to each other, The disintegration on earth of our life? Taking the baby away from the arms of his mother, are we also there to witness her pain and strife? Take the hand of discipline from the parent; to put the weapon in the hand of a child. Do we aspire no more for the innocent and the pure of heart is weak and reviled? We MUST see the pain in the eyes of so many, who have been broken by our affliction on them! Can’t we stop this holocaustal tyranny! We are one in the same yet we judge and condemn. Feel the hearts heavily laden with anguish from the pace that can’t be kept anymore. Cry the tears; for we are the reason they languish a Catharsis we’ve consumed, only to abhor. I cannot cry anymore or ache any less, I speak from the depths for salvation of the soul. Reality-In-Check must be seen, I implore. Before the Tempest Bell has rung, and life takes its toll! BY, Kaiyu [This message has been edited by Kaiyu-1 (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kaiyu-1~ WELCOME!! Wow!  I really loved this.......very profound indeed......excellent first post!"Taking the baby away from the arms of his mother,are we also there to witness her pain and strife? Take the hand of discipline from the parent; to put the weapon in the hand of a child." I related to this ......  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions, yes this is profound, that's the word...profound. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaiyu-1~ Welcome to the most passionate family of poets on the Internet. Interesting entrance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is too good to let it pass by so fast......... *BUMP* |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Wlecome to Passions. A very good entry. Your concerns show clearly, never refrain from having a voice. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kaiyu-1, Intriguing entrance here. Welcome to Passions!! You have a very intresting style. Looking forward to more. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kaiyu-1, Intriguing entrance here. Welcome to Passions!! You have a very intresting style. Looking forward to more. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kaiyu-1 Awesome read here, very much enjoyed, and you are OH so right, much wisdom in your words, some day I hope to see the world in a different light too, welcome to passions friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi again, wanted to add to my library,  Love, Cerenity |
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