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Open Poetry #10

I WasI Am (haiku)

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-10-22 02:13 PM

I Was~I Am

smothered lilies fade
bright hues once danced on strong stems
now forest floor mulch

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 10-22-2000).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-10-22 02:28 PM

Snow~

Picture the lily
Glorious petals faded
Mulched beauty is shared

*We just LOVE Haiku and Senryu here ...
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-10-22 04:02 PM

~Here, here,...I agree. Enjoying your haiku. "smothered lilies fade",...love this line much. Thank ya. *Peace.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

3 posted 2000-10-22 08:37 PM

Have I ever told you how much I admire your writing? I believe one word best defines it - ''Engaging''

~enb~

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2000-10-22 09:20 PM

Marge, Thank you so much for that lovely reply!!

Spitfire, I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Robert love, I do believe it's time you attempted a haiku *smiling* thank you for your reply sweetie.

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