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The Colour of Trust
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"The Colour of Trust" I often dream in colour, you said an amber hue about your head and as you took my trembling hand your own the shade of warming sand I felt the glow of midnight sky descend its drape round you and I Rainydays |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! What a great start, nothing is more beautiful in poetry than color.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome to Passions, Rainydays! What an entrance you have made. Simple and sweet, and beautiful. Good work! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Rainydays! This is lovely! I look forward to reading more from you! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainyDays~ This is a lovely way to begin a long friendship within the family of the greatest poets on the Internet. WELCOME to the posting side ... hope we see much more from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rainydays-- this is beautiful! welcome to passions. hope you enjoy it here as much as i do. i am sure you will. you have surely entered with a bang! take care, amy  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome Rainydays. . . Nothing like dreaming in colour. . . we remember them better that way. . . Looking forward to seeing more from you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Rainydays, Welcome to our little family. This was a lovely start. Looking forward to seeing more of your work here. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Rainydays welcome to Passions. Trust is very important in a relationship...it can open many doors...a lack of trust can close those doors tight...James |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Irish Rose, thank you for the nice welcome. You're right! Poetry allows us a venue for displaying that colour, doesn't it? Elizabeth, thank you, also, for such a warm welcome. I am glad to be here. (smiling) Denise, oh my what a lovely gesture your greeting is! Thank you so much for that...how absolutely cool! Marge, thank you so much. I think I'm going to really enjoy it here, and I certainly appreciate your hospitality! Aimster, hi and thank you! I was trying to tiptoe in! Thanks for such a sweet welcome! Sven, oh yes I agree with you. Dreaming in colour seems to be much more memorable, at least to me. Thank you for the kind welcome. Lone Wolf, thank you! I am looking forward to reading and sharing with you all too! James, how true! And a trust betrayed is worst of all, in my opinion. Thank you for taking time to welcome me! I am glad to be here! Hope it was okay to "speak" to everyone in a list...thanks so much to ALL! Rainydays |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Raindays, welcome to Passions, If this smooth piece is a sample of your work, I look forward to reading more. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is a wonderful poem to enter our little community with. I think you'll find a place here.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rainydays~ Welcome! This is very pretty....looking forward to more........ -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Kethry, oh thank you for your very kind welcome. I look forward to reading everyone's work as well. Poet deVine, thank you! This seems like such a nice place for sharing poetry. You all have made me feel so welcome here already! SEA, I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem, and thank you very much for such welcoming words. Rainydays |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Rainydays, What an introduction to Passions, Welcome. I look forward to reading more, this is just beautiful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Rainydays - & Mondays.... Very nice work - and - Welcome to Passions - It's a truly wonderful place - You'll love it here..  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions RainyDays! What a lovely lyrical piece you've graced us with as your first post ... wonderful! I look forward to reading more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Rainydays-Welcome! Very sweet and colorful imagery here, nice read. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and a big Balladeer welcome, too, poet. This is proof positive that it's not the quantity of the words....it's the quality. This poem is excellent... |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
9 Ws 4U... Wow! What Wonderful Words! What Well Written Work! Welcome! |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
My goodness, but you all are awfully sweet! Daniel J D, thank you for the warm welcome you've extended. I am happy to have found my way to such a delightful group of folks. I'm glad you enjoyed my little verse...thanks for the sweet words. Nan, know what? I think I already "do" love it here! Thanks for the welcome. I hope you like me better than icky Mondays! lol Kit, another sweet and sincere welcome...thank you so much! Balladeer, thank you for that encouraging welcome. Your poem about the costume party was priceless! Toddles, thank you for those nine (I counted) W's - Whew! What a Welcome! Rainydays |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!! What a wonderful verse from you....anyone that can see and paint the color of trust must be penning with an eagle feather quill and that makes you "COOL" in my book. Look forward to reading more from you. I know that you will love it here. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Nice poem, it says so much in so few words. have fun here- I do! Krissie I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making you lose ur way I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel ~Touch and Go |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rainy days---what a beautiful poem! Welcome to Passions. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That little flapping folder icon is like a mouth saying "Feed me, feed me." Instead, you fed me. Look forward to more. Mike |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welcome to passions, this is a wonderful start...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...you entered with such grace and beauty |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovely coulored piece. loved reading it, welcome to passions Charisma |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Wow!! Mark, thank you for sharing your enthusiasm with me ~ your warm welcome is adorable. I'm glad you enjoyed my little verse! Krissie, I'm glad you are having fun...how could you not? You all are quite incredible. Thank you for reading! Martie, thank you very much for your welcoming words! Tracie, thank you! I look forward to sharing our words! Paula, what a lovely thing to say...thank you so much! Charisma, so nice of you to let me know you enjoyed reading this. Thank you, and thanks for the kind welcome! You all are so gracious! Rainydays |
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