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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ooooohhhhh - This is dreamy... It's enough to make a girl wish she had brown eyes and brown hair....  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely Bill - I like the way it's presented... but what about BLUE eyes? (Maybe brown tinted contacts for us blue eyed ladies?)  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 .....how did you know that I have such brown eyes..... wish that someone wrote such a beautiful poem for me.... *sigh*...but well...even that it wasn't ment for me....I enjoyed reading him. Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Gorgeous indeed..even though my eyes are blue haa..tears here haa... ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ This is truly lovely. A treasure of artful abuction of the heart ~ Enjoyed it ... really enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Very lovely indeed. I will be waiting for more of your writings. Hmmmmmmmm! Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Nan, Appreciate the kind comments about this writing. Thank you for your kindness, and I'm very glad that you came by. A very good evening Poet deVine, You are so kind to take the time to drop in. As for the question about BLUE eyes, it's on the way. Did the first cut today. Good evening Charisma, Well, I really didn't know that you have brown eyes. And, please take this poem as your own, for the brown eyes that you have. I also want to thank you for your gracious comments. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Victoria, Thank you for the considerate comments you have made about this poem. I am working on one about BLUE eyes, and hope to have it out soon. Good evening Marge, I do thank you for coming by, and commenting on 'Brown Eyes'. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and again thank you Marge, I do appreciate your comments. Evening Ariana, You are very gracious with your words, and I do appreciate the kindness of them. Thanks for coming by to read this writing. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill Absolutely beautiful especially with the picture behind the words. Really enjoyed reading it. didi |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Wow Bill, Awesome, totally awesome! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Wow! I don't know how you got that picture here! But the poem is absolutely lovely ~ ! ~ ~ Ahem - excuse me, but as a lady I just have to ask - what about green eyes? I have those! Seriously, though, a wonderful poem. You must be a tender romantic like my husband and me. I loved it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening didi, Thank you for your kind comments, and I did have some help with the artwork. It did come out very well. Evening Gemini, I don't know what to say with your awesome comment. Except perhaps, thanks for commenting, and for reading this writing. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Rosemary J. Gwaltney, Well, I must admit I had some help with the picture, as this was the first time I have posted with one. Thank you for the kind comments about this poem. Rosemary, I have already have had comments for blue eyes, and have a rough cut completed for this. So, now it looks as if green will have to be in there also. And as soon as I am able, green it will be. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is the loveliest poem I've ever had the privilege to read and enjoy. Thank you, Bill. (of course, my eyes are brown, but that has nothing to do with it!< !signature--> "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bill this is a lovely format and style...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Irish Rose, Thank you for your most gracious comments, as it is an honor to read another poets comment with the words and grace that you have. I am humbled reading your them. And I thank you "Brown Eyes". Good morning James, Thank you for coming by once again to read one of my writings. I do appreciate it. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ok I admit it... I have brown eyes so I HAD to read this. Really stunning poem. Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
came back to read this once again.... and...read your reply too, thank you that I may take this one as mine I really loved it, and a thread is allready up to my library. Charisma |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning BloomingRose, I am glad that the writing caught your eye and you came by to read it. Nice to have you visit, and thanks for the kind comments. Good morning again Charisma, I am very honored that you thought enough of this writing to come back for the second time. And I am truly flattered to have this one reside in your library. Enjoy this poem, ye of 'Brown Eyes'! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, here you are! I'm glad I finally found this piece. bad bad Bill..You didn't send me the link and I had to search for it!  Oh well, it was worth it! This was one of the most beautiful poems about brown eyes I've ever read. This being a rare subject of poetry makes it even more special. I don't know who you wrote it for, but she sure is a lucky brown eyed lady. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Bill, This was absolutely wonderful!!! The graphics are stunning!!! Great poem here. Wishing I had brown eyes too.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Temptress, I do apologize for not sending the link, and no excuses. I thank you for the graciousness of your comments about this poem. And it was written for all of the women out there that have "Beautiful Brown Eyes". Thanks Temptress, you are very kind. Good morning Lone Wolf, I'm glad that you liked this writing of mine. And I would like to thank you for the kindness of your comments. I did have help with the graphics, and I do indeed thank the person that gave me that help. Well, I'm doing one on blue eyes, hope to have it completed soon. Thanks again. |
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