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“of all the Seasons”
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“of all the Seasons” |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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all to soon our daz become nought I < !signature-->watched the many passing through I think of things I’d wrought sometimes thought of you words blanketed lonely skies how can simple seasons return be so displaced from mind why not rather erased of sadness O such times with out meaning while we’re hurried o’er words with little reasons wandering as if the misery we’ve missed or the feeling weather how is it I’ve come to know you fueling every crevice even tucked in corners well away from passing shadows what excuse this time did you use to meander over for this unearthing thus Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. ~Marge Tindal~ [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ time did you use to meander over for this unearthing thus Oh, my .... didn't need any other excuse than seeing your name. I know that I'll find a treat ... and I did ! Lovely thoughts, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
What Marge quoted plus: "how is it I’ve come to know you fueling every crevice even tucked in corners well away from passing shadows" I liked the lead in - -super Dale don't know how you do it - I just love it! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale..whenever I see your name I know that I am going to be the lucky one. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, you carry me on wings of luxury to such luscious memories of the fueling of every crevasse even tucked in corners well away from passing shadows ... m m m m m . . . ! ! ! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Rosemary, Darn it, will you get back on your own dark computer... this one's mine. Here have a kiss and go write something other than that..! baby bubba |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
hay, Marge, Bill, Martie... Rosemary will you let me type... You guys are great... yes RJ, you too. Thank you all, dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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