Open Poetry #10 |
The Lost Litle Girl |
Nascar_Chick New Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 7 |
The Lost Little Girl I know this girl, you see she use to live inside of me she dreamed big dreams of goin away to beautiful places and meeting the most interesting people as a little girl she use to sit in her bed at night and plan out this perfect life she had everything figured out every last little detail she knew what she wanted from life but this little girl is lost... she lives in a body not her own she slowly watched herself turn into someone else now, she's just an empty soul reaching out for something to hold on to she screams out for help but her voice is a language no one else understands she'll sit and cry all day long but her tears are invisible to everyone else no one understands her hell........no one even notices her anymore slowly, she's slipping away from everyone and everything she has no one........has nothing she's tried so hard for so long but her time has run out she is no longer need here, no longer wanted here this lost little girl is saying ........Goodbye........ |
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Smells Like Teen Spirit New Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 3 |
Good stuff Bad if your relating to yourself you might need some help girl. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is so terribly sad and lonely a piece, hope it's not your real thoughts, if so and you need or want someone to talk to feel free to email me Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a true poem indeed. i know very well this theme of the loss of innocence. if you like Green Day, then you probably know the song "the grouch". when you're little and the world is never the big place you see it for now, life is so easy to plan for. now i know that there are things out there that are scary and real. there are demons to face down and temptations that are hard to fight. more often than not, this is not the life i ordered. it never will be. it's like you said. that lovely little dreamer inside is saying goodbye. good thoughts. i enjoyed. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Remember there is hope. It's like a cloud you see where the rainbow is. Just look up and ask to see. hugs, Deb |
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Nascar_Chick New Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 7 |
Thanks everyone |
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