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Open Poetry #10

Interlude 47.2

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-10-20 12:33 PM

Time
Beyond the moments
Together.

Rhyme
Beneath the meaning
Will gather.

Brood
Within your frowning
And sadness

Mood
Darken and drowning
No gladness.

Time
Without the movements
Is Darkness.

Gloom2000

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2000-10-20 02:02 PM

I like when there is so much said
with not many words.
Well done!

snow

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-10-20 03:45 PM

~Glum. Truth. Ouch. Great write. *Peace.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

3 posted 2000-10-20 03:52 PM

nice work

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2000-10-21 07:38 AM

Thank you, Snow,
at times an emotion only takes a few words.

Thank you, SpitFire,
Glad you enjoyed the words
even if you found them a touch harsh.

Thank you, MA Miller,
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.

Gloom

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