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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i want to be the air surrounding you that you may inhale with need of me that as you move i'm always with you ever touching you i want to be your sheets at night embracing you as silk caressing your sweet skin with warmth i want to be entangled with you i want to be the darkness to watch over you as you dream to feel your honey breath as you breathe into me i want to kiss your eyelids with the atmosphere i want to be there curled up beside you in the night dream me in... -dgvarner theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, this is very nice. Sweet and enticing, oh and yes you can be my sheets anytime...   Parker |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee this is so beautifull, I can feel this poem deep in my soul. Perfect as always, you know if you keep producing these gems you're going to be deaf from all the applause. Take care Bubbles |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..so you'll dream me in...? BUBBLES..looking forward to deafness... hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i love this. i'd re-type my favoriteparts, but that would be the entire poem...lol. this is really cool.  love ya, -tricks < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey there TRICKS! so glad you liked this one thanks for your never ending encouragement--my first "biggest fan"  hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh and how I can relate to this! I like, I like... that last line: dream me in... wonderful. K "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Oh this is brilliant!! Loved the last line....but then again I loved the whole poem..LOL!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SEVERN and BETH..thanks for your replies! i'm glad you liked this one..(the last line was my favorite too... )hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I guess you know i'm back.... so let the dreaming begin... Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so glad youre back parker where would you like the dreaming to begin ... hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dg, I loved reading this one, a poem of intimacy with respect. Good warm fuzzy feeling read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks DENNIS! so it was tasteful aye glad you liked!! thanks so much for reading me hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
NICE POEM!!!!!!!! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
really liked this, its beautiful, will look forward to more of yours |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is the essence of one, just as the river flows so rapidly this poem flowed with love. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
VANDANA..THANKS!!!!!!! glad you liked it JELLYBEANS..thank you for that will look forward to hearing from you again ROSEBUD..so sweet your reply...thank you for reading hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wonderful romance here, with a tender touch. deb |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
DG, very sweet poem you have here the last verse (dream me in) just swept me off my tippitoes Coco |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Maybe i'll be too busy to be dreaming.... i can only hope....  Parker |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
if i really dream you in, will you do all the nice nice things you mentioned in your sweet tender poem? its nice to see a poem from you again! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoy the way you weave romantic desires...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very nice poem, D..I love the flow of thoughts and how well you've expressed your feelings for the one you love. Great job! Nathan |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bloomingrose..i thank you kindly coco..are you back on the ground yet? parker..dream baby... thanks kaile..its good to hear from you again james..i enjoy that you enjoy them... nate..thanks for that hugs, dg "after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall |
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