Open Poetry #10 |
They Who Dare |
eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
They who dare to reach for the sky........ Live among the stars........ They who walk in unknown lands.......... Are unknown no more...... They who reach outside themselves......... Find that which lies deep inside them...... They who love without ceasing........ Cease to be alone....... They who find the love of their life....... Find the words to the song that was taught to them in the womb....... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
And I am learning those words. The wisdom in these piece speaks a thousand words. Excellent! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"A man's reach should exceed his grasp" When I was a senior in high school I had to write a paper on this statement. Your poem would have been great if I had had it 31 years ago. BEAUTIFUL WORK !!!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Woven like gold...short and simple yet these lessons are the hardest of all to learn. Fantastic writing~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
eyesplus2, may we all dare to learn these lessons. . . Excellent my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
eyesplus2- you have a talent for saying so much in so few words. love this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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