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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-10-24 02:20 AM



They who dare to reach for the sky........
Live among the stars........

They who walk in unknown lands..........
Are unknown no more......

They who reach outside themselves.........
Find that which lies deep inside them......

They who love without ceasing........
Cease to be alone.......

They who find the love of their life.......
Find the words to the song that was taught to them in the womb.......

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Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-10-24 02:38 AM


And I am learning those words.  

The wisdom in these piece speaks a thousand words.
Excellent!  


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-10-24 10:43 AM


"A man's reach should exceed his grasp"
When I was a senior in high school I had to write a paper on this statement. Your poem would have been great if I had had it 31 years ago. BEAUTIFUL WORK !!!!!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-10-24 10:45 AM


Woven like gold...short and simple yet these
lessons are the hardest of all to learn.  
Fantastic writing~

Sven
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4 posted 2000-10-24 08:21 PM


eyesplus2, may we all dare to learn these lessons. . .

Excellent my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2000-10-24 08:24 PM



eyesplus2-
   you have a talent for saying so
   much in so few words.  
   love this.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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