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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-19 05:00 AM

I do love you
for that my hearts fury
commands my pace.

I do love you
to which my world
brightens with your face.

I do feel you
the touch you gave
mingles with the stars.

I do feel you
the lasting carress
from afar.

I do need you
your eyes transfix
my souls content.

I do need you
for my heart beats slow
when you are gone.

For all my strength
and weakness I believe
I do love you
you have all of me.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-10-19 10:48 AM

I do feel you
the touch you gave
mingles with the stars.

I do feel you
the lasting carress
from afar.

I do need you
your eyes transfix
my souls content.

I do need you
for my heart beats slow
when you are gone.

For all my strength
and weakness I believe
I do love you
you have all of me.
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and she should believe now too...
sincere beautiful emotions Michael
genuine and real
and ya know how we love a poet in love

take care sweet one
me

Martinque
Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 69

2 posted 2000-10-19 12:34 PM

Had could any women resist this!!!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-10-19 01:54 PM

Not me...simple words, but put together in such a sincere and heartfelt statement...very nice, Michael...

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2000-10-19 01:58 PM

I think this is the most beautiful, sincere and irrestable poem I have ever read from you.

Simply perfect!!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-10-23 12:03 PM

I had to have a second read. Sometimes, we just need to be reminded.......

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Passions Voice
Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

6 posted 2000-10-24 06:19 PM

I have to agree with Marina and Martinque. How could any woman resist?

I know that I can't. This is a wonderful poem. Again, she is a lucky woman.

passion is life. . .

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