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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
I know it is all over You do not trust me anymore Nevertheless, I beg you Just give me another chance If I now show compassion Do not maintain your distance I know I have hurt you Let me come back into your heart I ask you to take the time To look back on the memories Those days we shared in happiness In the name of the love we had For each other, because without you The days are so empty And my tears never cease Knowing, you love me no more. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel* This pulls at my heart...show this to her and I'll bet she will see your heart felt plea within this lovely weave. Best wishes to you and your mother~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies* You are so sweet, I appreciate your wonderful words. Mothers are so important to us all. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Daniel- wow...this one just tugs at me... such a deeply heartfelt write. my best to you my friend...my thoughts are with you.  hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Thank you so much. My mother has been very influential in my life. Like most people I have made mistakes, I still treasure her very much. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Part of the special relationship between Mother and child is that the love doesn't die. It may be hidden under layers of hurt or mistrust but if you dig for it you'll find it very much alive under there. Nicely written. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Daniel, reading your post....well it made me cry, my first poem when I came inhere was "heartpain"......about losing my daughter. can't tell you how your words have touched me, very deeply indeed.....wish that it were the words of my daughter...and you know.. a mothers heart is always filled with love.....even when she tried to protect herself for more heartpain...but there is always room for love in her heart. I truly hope that all come fine, for both of you.... hugs Charisma |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very emotional poem, Daniel! I send *HUGS* to you. I hope everything works out for the best with you and your mom! Great write, my friend. sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poet's Sister, Thank you sister here at Passions, I appreciate your wonderful caring words. I am deeply touched. Charisma, I am so sorry about your daughter. I have always loved my mother, but there comes a time when the demand for compassion is frowned upon and leaves doubts in a child's mind. I thank you and pray for both you and your daughter, you are such a caring person. Snowpants, Oh! How happy you make me to read your words. Thank you so very much. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and touching...I was talking to a friend of mine yesterday and she is going thru a divorce and her soon to be ex and her son are on the mainland and she is in Hawaii and she has learned to live without her son...sad the way life takes us sometimes...I told her that a child only has one mother and someday he will be knocking on her door....James |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
jmlee, How appropriate your reply was. Yes, at times the child tries so hard to reach out, but there are mothers out there that refuse to give a bleeding heart another chance. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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