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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
A candle in the wind A flame burning so bright then blown out by the wind. A gasp, a breath.... A possiblity torn away A life ended so shortly so briefly,so silently. An escape from the reality. many Sadnesses, many teardrops. A lie fighting to win past trust, past truth. A dream shattered, by nostalgia. a love, a loss. A needing A feeling.... [This message has been edited by BirdeeB (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BirdeeB, This is a very moving poem. There is so much feeling here, one can only stare in awe of your words. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It is a poem with feeling and the title is perfect. Good read. Kathleen |
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