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From Deepest Depths |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Ok , This is not something going on with me it is just a poem that came to me tonight.  From deepest depths of love's remorse From whence my heart strayed from it's course Within these walls I hang my head Stumbling through visions of dread I feel the heat upon my back I know you're peering through the cracks The cracks upon this broken heart This heart you left all torn apart The love once shared now broken and frayed All but ashes of rot and decay < !signature--> Wise man say "Those who live in the past let the future sneak up on them" and "Make each moment count, it could be your last" [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well Jeffrey, you were being psychic with me during the night, thats why you wrote this, when it is not happening to you It is my life. catalinamoon |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff... you could have fooled me...you penned these feelings flawelessly. i would swear it had something to do with you  excellent poem my friend.take care. amy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, most good poetry makes us believe it is all real, as this was and is. Good to read you again! Kathleen |
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