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---My Love For You---
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---My Love For You--- |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
---My Love For You--- < !signature-->Love's been compared, To a beautiful bird. Love's like a flower in bloom, I have heard. Is it the warmth In a summer night's breeze? Is it the green, In the leaves on the trees? My love for you, Is like none of those things Not a plant, nor a breeze, Nor a bird with bright wings. You see, it's like nothing That walks or that flies. For the birds and the plants, Yes, even the wind, will all die. Some men see things as they are and ask "WHY ?" I see things as they could be and ask "WHY NOT ?" [This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yes, even the wind, will all die. =============== damn... talk about impact of line.... take that line and the title.. and they could stand alone... excellent write ... take care jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just perfect...to be loved like that...what a lucky person |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
love is undescriptive in so many ways sometimes there isnt enough words to do love justice, but the warmth of a smile does wonders  this is beautiful |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LonelyStranger~ A lovely thought that love will not die~ But even if it should a vestige of it remains in the memories it has etched on our hearts and no one can take our memories Just a lovely write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LS~ Loved this  - SEA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Lonely Stranger, Liked this very much, and so true the last verse. Bill |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lonely Stranger, Very nice writing. I too believe that true love will never die. Here is to you finding the one you seek some day. Powerful emotion here. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I believe true love will never die...but finding true love is hard sometimes! Loved your poem.  |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
I hope I find this type of love someday. Lovely poem Jon |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Lonely Stranger, with poetry like this, surely your writing name is a misnomer? This is sweet, tender, and full of devotion. Thank you. Rainydays |
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