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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Ease of grace I watch him fly Across the path of Eastern sky Graceful strokes of powerful wings Ear piercing scream of pain he sings Lasting are the memories he gives Strength is his shield as he lives Where will he land and will I see I long for him to soar wild and free Nothing shall hold him from his plight Gallantly he soars as his hope takes flight *Happy Birthday Eagle One* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It is becoming rare to see a perfect rhyme scheme, such as this one and you did a great job with it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
My dear sweet Butterfly, your words are the greatest of gifts. You know how you have touched me with this. Thankyou just doesn't seem to be enough. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely butterflies dont cry and HAPPY BIRTHDAY EAGLE ONE~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Great job! Deb |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Holly girl... ya penned him perfectly.. very cool poem ...sweet offering to very kind friend across the miles. and to Eagle ... HAPPY BIRTHDAY MATE  Hope you day is filled with all things special to your heart and heres to a year of ~FATE AND DESTINY~ ..LOL did we EVER settle that debate...  somehow I doubt it...LOL have a good one on me... later-wearing your birthday suit gator    hehejm |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies, Well versed, shows your support for Eagleone clearly. Terrific. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful verse from you to show the love you have for a friend. Your heart is heard in every line as is the emotion and sincerity of the flow. "Eagle One"----HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!! [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Butterflies! Happy Birthday, Eagle One! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely...it passed by me, two or three times today, always coming back to the top... you are special such as he... congratulations to both of you, for verse well done...and time well shared... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly-- as always your heart of gold shines through. perfect declaration of friendship you have penned here. happy birthday eagle one. take care both of ya. Amy  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Holly~ Beautiful sentiments well penned sweet oneEagleOne~ HAPPY BIRTHDAY Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kathleen* Heart felt thanks...this is my first acrostic so I very much appreciate your comment Eagle* Thank you is more than enough between friends! May your birthday be wonderful!! Victoria* Thank you~ Deb* Thank you~ Janet* Thank you girlie...never know what we can do till we try...lol didn't you tell me that once?...nah I'll never admit to that Daniel* Thank you very much your comment is very much appreciated~ Mark* Yeppers...he is a good friend imagine that...a man and a woman being Just friends...Yes it can be done **this was the disclaimer before any tounges start wagging** Thank you Mark...you know how much I appreciate your comments~ Denise* Many thanks to you~ Sunshine* Time with friends is always well spent...thank you for reading~ Amy-girl* Thank-you so much...and you take care of You Tracie* I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you very much~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY EAGLE |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ What a lovely acrostically done poem. It's just lovely for a lovely person. You're rocking, gal ! *Another birthday wish to you, dear EagleOne. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, Wonderful acrostic for Eagle One!! I hope he had an excellent birthday. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Charisma* Thank you so much...that graphic is so beautiful!! Marge* Your comment made me feel so good, this was my first attempt and wanted it to be good for Eagle's Birthday...Thank you so much~ LW* I hope he did too...thank you my dear friend!! |
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