Open Poetry #10 |
empty walls |
kevinsmommy99 New Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 2 |
It is so lonely here inside my heart missing your soul touching mine our lives being entwined missing the secuity and love you gave then took away i look around at the empty walls that were once brightly splattered with the intense love we shared and i wish we could start over but there will be no starting over I an't turn back time and you can't find me in your heart the heart I once called home now, there's no place for me there's no love for me visions of our wedding, other children, all are faded worn out, like all my hopes and dreams this excrutiating pain, my soul being eaten away is so hard to bear it's so hard to hold on without you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I could feel the pain in your words..life is but a stage and im sure there will be another leading man in your life that can fill your home with the love you are missing again.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MOMMY99, I must tell you this made me teary-eyed... You've penned such heart on screen and very griping I may add... Hugs2U for sharing this poem with me2day |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes this can be a very painful time...when the remorse and regrets arrive and we know there is nothing we can do except feel alone...yet this will pass and time will be our friend and the day will arrive when the past is way behind us and we are living in the moment and our future is bright...happened to me...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KM~ Touching piece. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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