Open Poetry #10 |
Justice |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Justice Amy M Kennedy ***Amy's Note*** not my usual style...but i had to get this out in the open! How dare you treat your own child this way Aren't you ashamed of what you do? Do you get pleasure out of hurting others Is this what occurs when others don't listen to you? You claim that our love is sin And that we'll be punished on Judgement Day Will you fight at all costs to win? Just remember what goes around comes around Yes...everything you do and say You go to Church and pray to the Lord above However, truth be known You have no conception of real love You sit in judgement, and put the blame on me Putting your weakness on others, so you feel free Well justice will be served You can count on that And the hands of time are on our side Just a simple known fact So if you must, continue this charade But when the play is over and you are all alone You will realize it was you who was played Or is your heart made of stone? Tears after tears your daughter cries You act like she is a country you rule Her heart now hangs heavy, she no longer tries But in the end, it will be you who was the fool [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Amy--such sadness and anger you have penned here...I wish you peace. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
STRENGTH N LOVE N FAITH N HUGS 4uAIMSTER Coco |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Martie-- you picked up my feelings in a nutshell. though i am learning how to channel my anger in a positive way thanks for your reply. take care. coco-- awwww! you made me smile. thank you friend! take care both of ya, amy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, Such an anxious, angry, prickly poem. *HuGS*Well doneKeth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just remember what goes around comes around Yes...everything you do and say =================== those 2 lines say it all my dear .. and YES PURGE it in poetry ... like seeing ya flex your muscle excellent declaration Amy-girl ... there is much strength to be found in the number 2 ... stronger every day love ya me gatorgirl me |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Amy, You have every right to be upset. And you should be proud of the effort you showed here to point out that you care so much. My warmest and sincere embrace to you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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