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behind an unopened door
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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each cabinet door opens and closes in succession hunger and dissatisfaction mounting with each slamming door hunger growls for something that just isn't here i am not sure what it is but i'd recognize it if i saw it of that i am sure and i turn, wishing i could identify this churning this incessant impatience that is more than hunger it is more than a want, it is a buried deep need and i can't put my finger on what i am craving in my life i only know that where i am now it isn't it i only know i must keep looking for it lies behind an unopened door |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oman i was just in there too and i realized quite frantically we are outta twinkies!! love the insight in this one corazonie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is great!!! (But opening doors around my place can be hazardous to your health... every closet is overflowing! LOL) |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks walt *hands you a twinkie*  yep, I know that feeling, never enough closets to hide all the junk *g*...course not saying you have junk...  lol hugs |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Corazon-Very lovely piece, as I search for those answers myself, you describe them fantastically. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, this hit close to home, very much, thank you! Kathleen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Corazon, yet another uplifting one from you...I feel this way most times too...and then I think I've found it, and realize there's something else...keep on going!!! |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Even though I don't always find what I'm looking for, I often find some great surprises when I start opening all those doors. Nice poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure most people can relate to this! I know I can! Very good, Corazon! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
that just isn't here i am not sure what it is but i'd recognize it if i saw it of that i am sure and i turn, wishing i could identify this churning this incessant impatience that is more than hunger it is more than a want, it is a buried deep need and i can't put my finger on what i am craving in my life i only know that where i am now it isn't it ===================== oh yeah....i relate to this WAY TOO MUCH and ya know...it aint even gonna be found in the kitchen ... excellent metaphors for the unrequited ache C.. excellent indeed jm |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
HUSG |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
gemini, Irish rose and passing shadows, yep maybe we will find that someday someone if we open enough doors huh? thank you very much poet's sister, nice positive attitude, thank you much denise thank you...good to see you jm sigs and thanks, yep I knew you would know this one rg...big hugs back |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Corazon, I can relate to this, particularly "I know this isn't it." Keep searching for the prize and have fun on the hunt. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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