Open Poetry #10 |
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Radio Heart |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
You may have read my "what will she think" post, and if you did, you might be interested to know why I finally decided to write the letter. Well I realised i had nothing to lose, as I would never get what I wanted if i didnt send it. I realised this after i wrote the following: Sometimes i lie and wonder if through some telepathic glyph i can make you realise you're someone that i idolise Imagine lying there in bed a message glowing in your head someone far away loves you and he wants you to love him too I hope you'd feel your heart beat fast the message has arrived at last wishful thinking on my part you'll never hear my radio heart |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You might be amazed what she hears |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
as a stand along poem this is incredible, with the explanation, even more touching ![]() |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Jhonbus, Very fine writing here . Looking forward to more . doc |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
why thankyou! it's certainly nice to know others enjoyed it. Of course, if you want to see more stuff i have written (poems of varying subjects/styles and dream diary etc) you can have a look at my website, The Secret Life of Jhonbus at www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/ ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this brings back tender memories of transistor radios...but it's a long story... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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