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Jhonbus
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since 2000-10-12
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Sheffield UK

0 posted 2000-10-13 12:56 PM


You may have read my "what will she think" post, and if you did, you might be interested to know why I finally decided to write the letter. Well I realised i had nothing to lose, as I would never get what I wanted if i didnt send it. I realised this after i wrote the following:

Sometimes i lie and wonder if
through some telepathic glyph
i can make you realise
you're someone that i idolise

Imagine lying there in bed
a message glowing in your head
someone far away loves you
and he wants you to love him too

I hope you'd feel your heart beat fast
the message has arrived at last
wishful thinking on my part
you'll never hear my radio heart



© Copyright 2000 John Ratcliffe - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
1 posted 2000-10-13 12:58 PM


You might be amazed what she hears
jinxed
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since 2000-09-27
Posts 86

2 posted 2000-10-13 01:52 PM


as a stand along poem this is incredible, with the explanation, even more touching  
Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
3 posted 2000-10-13 11:04 PM


Jhonbus,
Very fine writing here . Looking forward to more .
doc

Jhonbus
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since 2000-10-12
Posts 25
Sheffield UK
4 posted 2000-10-13 11:30 PM


why thankyou! it's certainly nice to know others enjoyed it.
Of course, if you want to see more stuff i have written (poems of varying subjects/styles and dream diary etc) you can have a look at my website, The Secret Life of Jhonbus at www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-10-22 05:17 PM


this brings back tender memories of transistor radios...but it's a long story...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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