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Through The Wind (590th Post)
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Through The Wind (590th Post) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Through the wind, I can feel your strenght, You open the door, You open the eyes To see the wind, I can feel the strenght Next to mine, Through the storm I can feel your gentleness, I can feel close to you, I want to know love of mine, Is still there for me, But I feel, Lonely, When you are gone away, I know, your love Is enough to lift me up, To the sky, Ifeel the wind In this love of mine, I can feel you will never come back, But through the wind, I can feel your strenght, Through the storm, I can feel your gentleness, Through your emotion, I can feel your love and pain, Throught the wind, I see you standing In the wind, Through the wind, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Congrats on your 590th post and I am finding it amazing that these back pages are holding so many beautiful verses left untouched. I am honored to be the first. Wonderful take on love and pain sharing times in the wind. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, Mark is right, where have I been? I've missed your work, and I like the style and the way this made the wind feel and seem so real. Kathleen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Thru the storm I can feel your gentleness." Touching words..I am with a woman that has a very gentle spirit and it touches my heart so much....James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Mark,I'm glad you've liked my poem!!!!!!!  Irish Rose,thank you!!!!, Jimlee12345,as always I really want to thank you for reading all of my poems!!!!!! Thank you all of you!!!!!!!You're so kind!!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
over the wind a song sings. . . Just wonderful my friend. . . congratulations on 590! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Sven!!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ vandana ~~~ Many, many congratualtions to you!!!!! This is really a beautiful poem, and I love the subject you chose....the wind.......... I'm looking forward to seeing many more of your wonderful poems!!  Follow your dream! |
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