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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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I always knew the... < !signature-->As the rains drift through a cloudy day showering thoughts with emotions discovering songs and conventional idioms of nought sure why dance through the shadows of darkness graceful wild and see what could possibly go wrong you’ve been consorted you’ve got to play along I’m sure you noticed motion into notions of worthless pain taking you in her arms away but then again words expand to the growing perceptions loss of feeling to imperfections I never knew exactly who you were but I always knew the rain. Writing isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... [Marge Tindal] [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I never knew exactly who you were but I always knew the rain."........that did it for me........  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ What beautiful thoughts are yours. You display such elegance with your poetry. You've got a pretty neat signature there too !  Wipe this honored smile off my face !  I love your thoughtfulness as it represents the you I've come to know. I love your friendship AND your poetry ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This just aches...I always knew the rain...do i ever know that feeling |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sea, thank you so much. Marge, I guess I can cheer... thanks for the smile. Paula, I guess sometimes I can write em... thanks all, dale |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
to imperfections I never knew exactly who you were but I always knew the rain. All i can say to this is WOW...the pain is very vivid. Wonderful penning. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem has a very sweet fragrance to it...James |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
James, thanks for the kind words... much appreciated. dale Writing isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... ~"Ma |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Mark I didn't forget you... it must be a memory thing... thanks my friend. dale Writing, isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
This is aesthetically pleasing as well as a lingual joy. A very nice form of free verse, lucky. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful...and yes..elegant. I never really knew how to describe your work. I loved the ending too! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Elizabeth, A lingual joy, huh... I like that... Temptress, don't give me that..! you know how to discribe things just fine. Maybe better than that come to think of it..! Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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