Open Poetry #10 |
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The Heart of a Poet |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
hi everybody! just thought i'd wander out of the pub, and try my hand in open... for a change. ![]() _______________________________________ the heart of a poet is found in his words- a heartbeat in every syllable hold it- caress it- claim it as your own... for until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the p o e t -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! It's nice to see you in Open too! ![]() Denise |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This is just beautiful.........words of truth...I have never been to the "pub"..I think I will stop in for a visit.... ![]() Jenn E |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Denise- thanks so much for reading, and thanks for the welcome too. ![]() Jenn E- glad you enjoyed this. thanks for reading. ![]() pub...we'd love to see you there. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW! The pub's loss is our gain. Great to see you....maybe I should wander over there for some libation, too ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
balladeer- wow...thank you so much. you flatter me. so glad you enjoyed this. come by the pub anytime...we'll be waiting for you. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ We welcome you here with open arms ... not to mention hearts ! LOVE YOUR PRESENTATION ... You're g r o w i n g and that's nice to see. ![]() Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Cool! I like this...visually well thought out...and a great message.. The pub's got some good poets it seems... ![]() "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- thank you so much for the welcome. ![]() your words of encouragement mean so much to me, my friend. ![]() you like this. love ya, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
severn- thanks so much for the response. your kind words are greatly appreciated. ![]() stop in at the pub some time...we'd love to see you. ![]() -vciky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vicky, so you decided to visit us commoner's ![]() and you did it in such style.... ![]() Do visit often... Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So glad you came to open. BTW....did you know that this qualifies for my challenge and you met it well. Beautiful graphic and wonderful verse as well. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wonderful job tricks!! do show me how to do this so i can be like you ![]() ![]() yeah, you and me both out of the pub! thanks for holding my hand on my way out ![]() hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
parker- lol...well, i don't think i'd call you commoners, but thanks for the compliment anyway. ![]() ![]() mark- thanks so much for the welcome and the kind response. i actually posted this just before i saw your challenge, so i decided to do another...'go fly a kite', for the challenge. thanks so much for reading. ![]() dg- glad you like this. it was really fun to do, and i have no doubt that you could do it too. ![]() me goes...well...that may take a little more work...lol. ![]() job'. ![]() here to open, and glad i could be there to help. ![]() love you all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Just a welcome and a well done. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks for coming over to open and for your wonderful presentation, subject matter and writing Superb! Liz |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Thank you so much for the 'welcome' and for the 'well done'. Glad you enjoyed this one. ![]() Liz- Thanks so much. ![]() this. Thanks for 'superb'. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I don't know how I could have missed this one but I sure am pleased that I caught it on this Friday the 13th... It is a lovely poem and I enjoyed the read so back to the top for you my friend ![]() ![]() |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Did you bring us something to drink from the pub? Just kidding, I like this very much, look forward to reading more from you. Kathleen |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Coco- thank you, my friend. ![]() so then, something good DID happen on friday the 13th...lol. ![]() so glad you enjoyed. ![]() Irish Rose- sorry...no open containers beyond the pub...lol...but feel free to drop in for a poetic thirstquenching anytime. ![]() thank you so much for the kind words. really glad you enjoyed this. ![]() thanks again, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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