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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-13 05:40 PM

I could never attempt forgiveness
nor dare I be the fool,
to explain my hearts trial
and let all slip away.
I am my souls decision
for which course I do take
and in frail eyes I see you
your tears consume my ache.
Of a distant memory revield
one of white satin dreams,
where the isle became our heaven
the windows of our names.
I could never attempt to say
what my heart has lost,
for in doing so admits defeat
and the times which we once won.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-10-13 05:47 PM

so beautifully sad Michael.

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-10-13 06:09 PM

I read and understand...James

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-10-13 10:18 PM

to explain my hearts trial
and let all slip away.
I am my souls decision
for which course I do take
and in frail eyes I see you
your tears consume my ache.
=================
I could never attempt to say
what my heart has lost,
for in doing so admits defeat
and the times which we once won.
==================

you break my heart with this one baby..
its like watching you bleed poetry ...
your words fall like sweet tears Michael.
me

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

4 posted 2000-10-13 11:49 PM

What a trial of sadness this conveys...

I could never attempt to say
what my heart has lost,
for in doing so admits defeat
and the times which we once won.

These lines strike directly home. Nicely
done, Micheal.

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (edited 10-13-2000).]

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-10-14 12:06 PM

Michael, this is so very heartfelt. Someone once told me that where God closes a door........He opens a window. I hope this rings true for you.

Hugs,
Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2000-10-14 12:12 PM

Hi Michael,

This I love, very sad but you show much wisdom, thank you for sharing.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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