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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-10-12 06:59 PM

Sometimes late at night when
no sound is heard or light
I think of you

When the robins are asleep
and I dream you are my sheik
I think of you

Under a canopy of lace
my eyes closed as I trace
the thought of you

But then morning comes along
an the bluebirds sings a song
again ..I think of you

As the day wanders on
wanders through and through
you dance upon my mind
under sky of powder blue
and I think of you
yes..oh yes.. I do

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-10-12 08:59 PM

Victoria, your poems are always so delicate and graceful...beautiful!

Denise

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2000-10-12 09:35 PM

Thank you Denise..so nice of you to say..i enjoy yours too..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-10-13 06:26 AM

"and I think of you
yes..oh yes..I do."
Loved the way the words flow
and the way you say yes oh yes I do...James

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-13 09:45 AM

Under a canopy of lace
my eyes closed as I trace
the thought of you

Victoria, brushstrokes of desire within your words...very nice.

Robert Joseph

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-10-13 10:02 AM

Thank you james.. for letting me send this poem back around again haa..i thought it was gone with the wind haa..but frankly my dear i dont give a damn haa...feeling silly this morning haa..

~Scarlett~

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-10-13 10:33 AM

Thank you Robert...So nice of you to peek in upon the linen of my canvas..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2000-10-13 10:36 AM

loved this one....

-SEA

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2000-10-13 10:56 AM

Thank you Sea..and for peeking in this morning...love hearing from you..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2000-10-13 11:27 AM

nice poem.liked it!!!!!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2000-10-13 11:33 AM

thank you vandana..im glad you enjoyed..thank you for taking time to read

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-10-16 12:50 PM

Thinking of you...James

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2005-08-20 01:10 PM

Victoria, your words are truly missed. I hope to see you writing again soon. This was lovely.

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