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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-12 05:12 AM

The jewel reflection in your eyes
that transport my fallen heart,
to long ago nights with you
when our bodies became as one.
Of sweet surrender to your lips
as you lay upon my breast,
gently placing hands on skin
to fire my souls unrest.
Tonight I dream of that far heaven
and remember your perfume,
the smile that came from your mouth
and the light from eyes of jewels.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-10-12 07:53 AM

The jewel reflection in your eyes
that transport my fallen heart,
to long ago nights with you
when our bodies became as one.
Of sweet surrender to your lips
as you lay upon my breast,
gently placing hands on skin
to fire my souls unrest.
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yep....THIS is what I'm always talking about..
this is what made me fall for your poetry...
when you write your "souls unrest" ...
its a thing of beauty...
love this one Michael...
another poetic jewel from your gifted pen
later-me sweet sensual-gator

me

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

2 posted 2000-10-12 08:25 AM

Wow.. I'm duely impressed.. Great work here..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-10-12 01:37 PM

This has got to be one of my absolute favourites of yours. I won't tell you how many times I read it!! This is simply exquisite writing. A "gem" of a write.

Damn! I got to get me some coloured contacts!!!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2000-10-12 09:14 PM

I have to add this to my library!!!

Marina

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-10-12 10:04 PM

Very beautiful, Michael!

Denise

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

6 posted 2000-10-13 12:20 PM

Don't ask!!!!! lol

I realized after I posted this I had already added it to my library!! Yeah, I know........DUH!!!!!!!

[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 10-13-2000).]

Martinque
Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 69

7 posted 2000-10-13 12:55 PM

I love reading your poetry! She sounds like a special lady indeed. Eyes so they say, are the window to the soul.

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