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Shadow Dancing |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
My hands trace the empty night Across the shadows glancing I move like dark to light All while I'm shadow dancing Reality's pains devour Arms outstretched and empty prancing She stays with every hour Everlonely longing dancing We caress the breeze with grace And still she is advancing And I could just touch her face If I weren't alone and dancing |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"I move like dark to light all while I'm shadow dancing"... Bob, I really enjoyed this poem you share and I compliment you on great writing my friend...  Coco |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it, and took the time to respond to it! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh wow...this is great...I can just see this...wonderful Bob |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love this poem..i thought it was great WHB.. dancing away..haha~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thankyou much, Paula!!! Victoria, thanks to you for reading and responding aswell. Glad it inspired visions for ya! [This message has been edited by Wobbly Head Bob (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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