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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2000-10-11 12:37 PM



Two lovers on a journey far.......
Saw many sights both bright and beautiful.......

A sunset with colors bright...........
Painting each ones heart with shades of discovery.......

A sunrise of new birth...........
Awakening new love for each one........

Stars brightly shining in the sky........
Making wishes shared.......realties lived

Two lovers on a journey far............
Saw each other and........Loved

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-11 12:41 PM


Nice when love finds it's way to reality isn't it?  Wonderful write and happiness abounds.
Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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2 posted 2000-10-11 04:28 PM


Beautiful and sweet.   Nice work!

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-10-11 05:04 PM


beautiful writing! true love is a wonderful gift, indeed. lovely poem you have here.
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


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