Open Poetry #7 |
I am ..... |
Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I am known and unknowing, The darkness in the light, I am the gentle breeze blowing, The moonlight in the night. I am alone amongst a crowd, Fulfilled with friendship on my own, I am loving hands and kisses soft, The heart within my home. I am longing for the impossible, Looking for dreams in cold reality, I am what I do, I am what I say, For love I'll search eternity. "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow! what a testimony. A pleasure to know you! wonderful words. Kathleen [email protected] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely....you sound like a wonderful person!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Tess, this is simply beautiful, with tight rhyme scheme, and heartspoken words of personal insight...Thank you for allowing me to meet you. Alicat |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Tess, - this is lovely -- And what a lovely person you are. I am glad to meet you. netswan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am what I do...I am what I say...for love I'll search eternity...very touching and revealing. Good luck in your search. James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tess, this is quite good. . . and I do believe that you've met this challenge very well!! Excellent and glad to meet you!! ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tess, this is a wonderful poem. You met the challenge with grace.... nice to meet you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tess, this is LOVELY. you did a wonderful job on this... very well written and expressed >>I am known and unknowing, The darkness in the light, I am the gentle breeze blowing, The moonlight in the night.<< that is beautiful!!!!! very nice...VERY ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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