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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
0 posted 2000-05-02 01:17 AM

I am the breeze on a nice summer night.
I am the breath that makes a life.
I am the beginning of the day.
I am the ending in dismay.
I am the joy in the morn.
I am the song of the forelorn.
I am the tear upon your eyelid.
I am the one whose heart is beating,
with you in my life I am.
I am love and love is me.
So together is what makes I am.


 
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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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Coastal Texas
1 posted 2000-05-02 01:32 AM

Rosebud...{now why did I just start thinking of Citizen Kane?}...this poem is short, sweet, and potent.  Very good wording for such a succinct message.  I especially liked the line 'I am love and love is me.'  Beautiful.

Alicat
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2 posted 2000-05-02 08:07 AM

Challenge met!!!! Nice to meet you Rosebud.  
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