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Open Poetry #7

Over Before It Started

LenMcC1
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 68

0 posted 2000-04-30 02:54 PM

Over Before It Started

Save my life
Please won’t you
All I ever needed
Was someone to be with me
Nothing can take me away
I can never go away without you

Last week’s incident
Should never have changed anything
Never have you ever blamed me before
Planted flowers are dying in the yard
Without the strength of two
But you like to play around
Without realizing your fate

Everyday when we talked
I loved you more than ever
But a friend of ours
Ruined all that with her mouth
Now maybe we’ll be never
It isn’t a shame though

I am alone, so alone
Why have my friends left
For a different group
Where love runs wild
And fun is free
But you are all I ever need
Only I must tell you somehow

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-30 05:41 PM

Len this is such a heartfelt poem.

Such pain and emotion is "yelled" out in
this piece.

Wish I had the answers.

netswan

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