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I Am (Challenge) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I Am (Challenge) I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart I wonder if one fine day all the world could unite as one I hear echoing harpsichords serenading all of the earth I see all poor people fed and clothed, living joyful lives I want peace and tranquility reigning amid all nations I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart I pretend I'm someone special who has meaning in life I feel the gentle wings of angels lift me when I'm sad I touch the stars while reaching for heavenly harmony I worry that I am only half the person I should really be I cry because of my helplessness to cure any situation I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart I understand man was created equal than things changed I say everything happens for a reason not always visible I dream of living upon the ocean drenched in tranquility I try to caress love upon all I meet with words of kindness I hope one day I can make a difference in many people's lives I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi There Lost Dreamer. This Challenge is so cool. Nice to meet you. Wonderful Poem -----May your dreams come true. netswan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gloria! this is great..you really went into the depths of your soul here...I'm also glad to 'know' you better....(I'm having a hard time writing mine).. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Gloria, this is simply beautiful...and there is no reason to pretend...you are someone special, and I'm very happy to know you better. Alicat |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is awesome, Gloria! Now I know why you sat in front of the computer until the sun came up... hehe... Seriously, you did some soul searching and came up with a very creative piece. Pretty cool challenge, huh? |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Hi Gloria. You don't have to worry about making a difference in others lives. You have made a difference in mine and I know in others that know you here. Great job with this.  It is a very kewl challenge. I am glad Ali brought this back. |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Absolutely beautiful! *applause* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~thank you for sharing a view of your soul, and what a beautiful view it is. This is a very awesome challenge, I must say! I am glad to get to know you better. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
L.D., how beautiful to be shown some of your lovely soul. This is a lovely poem and you are a lovely, special person...believe that!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, your poetry have certainly made a difference in my life you have some very noble thought-provoking wishes here...keep dreaming...i do hope your dreams come true  |
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