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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-04-30 01:37 AM

“I AM”

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I wonder if I will ever be able to make
some kind of difference in the world.

I hear my soul groping for loves
return to me.

I see Mother Nature delighting in her
ability to open the hearts of mankind.

I want to know I gave of myself hole
heartedly to all I could before I die.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I pretend to breathe a sigh of relief because
the world is in a state of complete peace.

I feel life is passing me by and I will
never really experience true love.

I touch a delicate rose and see the love God
has for all of mankind.

I worry that mankind will destroy the
earth before he learns humility.

I cry for all of the souls that didn’t experienced
true happiness before there passing.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I understand what it is to be lonely and
afraid.

I say all of mankind should walk in the steps
of his enemy.

I dream of a world that knows what true
contentment and joy means.

I try to help all of those that cross my path
with what ever means I have available.

I hope that all of the things mentioned in

this poem would come true.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

By, Cerenity

[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-30-2000).]

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-30 01:49 AM

Hi There Cerenity-1 Great Poem.
It is nice to get to know you.
I hope you find all you want out of
life and more.

netswan

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-04-30 01:57 AM

This should be all our goals..you've done a great job here...it's nice to finally get to know more about you..

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

3 posted 2000-04-30 02:09 AM

AMEN!

And I do hope you find that for whom you seek.

Very good reply to the challenge, and I'm glad I got to know a bit more about you.

Alicat

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-04-30 12:16 PM

Bump!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-04-30 01:45 PM

Thanks deVine!!

Cerenity, I've always felt that you were someone who was open to many things... and I can see that in this poem. . .

Wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2000-04-30 01:52 PM

Wow... I am pleased to make your aquaintence, Cerenity. This is humbling. Wow.

michael

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

7 posted 2000-04-30 02:15 PM

Hi everyone,

netswan,
Thank you so much, and I hope so too.

Poet deVine,
Goals in my life are what keep me alive.
Thank you for your reply.

Alicat,
This was a great idea to bring back, I hope everybody joins in. Thank you I hope to find true love some day.

Poet deVine, oooOOHH GOOOODIE.....

Sven,
Thank you Sven that was so nice of you to say I try my hardest to be open and honest.

Michael,
The wow is to you my friend for you have blessed many of trying time with your poems for me and I cannot thank you enough.

Thank you so much, Love Cerenity

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

8 posted 2000-04-30 02:44 PM

Dear Cerenity,

I do hope you find what you are looking for in life. Thank you for this look into your soul, it is very beatiful.(Your soul and your poem both).

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2000-04-30 03:07 PM

I knew you would write a beautiful and thoughtful poem to this challenge.
This is perfect and sincere.
very nice work

~as always, Take Care,JM~
--------------
I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

10 posted 2000-04-30 05:29 PM

Hi Lizzie,

Thank you so much for your kind words.

Hi Janet,

What a nice thing to say thank you so much.

Love Cerenity

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2000-07-05 03:28 AM

Cerenity-1..can relate to this piece...for dont we all seek to find true contentment in life...dont we all always yearn to make the world a better place..

i for one wish for all the things in your poem to come true

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