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Tell Me True, Where Are You?
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Tell Me True, Where Are You? |
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DeEpMeLaNcHoLy New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 9 |
Come to me Like a message in a bottle Wipe away my tears Tell me its okay Tell me that the sky is blue not gray Remind me that life is all thats its lived up to be Tell me you'll be here for me Show me the meaning of life Take away my pain and strife Sail me away, to distant lands Hold me tight, caress my hands Look at me deeply,tell me you care Lets have memories that we can share Gracefully, I'll treat you right Promise to be by your side through the night Ever so gently, reach your soul Making YOU happy will make me whole Where are you, oh perfect one Because it's you,my heart has won Tell me how you feel And if your love is real I promise to love you And always be true Through the days of our lives Our love is what strives |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
deepmelancholy, a poem of such hope. I like the way you ask to be sent a message in a bottle. Cool netswan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi DeEpMeLaNcHoLy, The message has been sent now it's the waiting game, but you will love someone completely by the sounds of this poem, great job, Cerenity |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I hope that whoever this poem is directed at will appreciate it cos it is so beautiful and full of love. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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