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Moment With You
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Moment With You |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sometimes in the dark like this I get a desire for you like this Want to feel, want to feel your kiss Don’t want to lose out on so much bliss Things I need to learn so much Have to feel, to feel your touch Never will it be too much Gracing me with your saving touch With you I know all With you when darkness falls I don’t heed anyone else’s call Time to stop, time to end it all I need to stop it fast Need to make this moment last |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Things I need to learn so much Have to feel, to feel your touch Never will it be too much Gracing me with your saving touch With you I know all With you when darkness falls I don’t heed anyone else’s call Time to stop, time to end it all ------------ once again you read my mind, this is perfect, love the way you write out your need and longing... so much intense depth of emotion. expressed so well. your jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You know JM, you have got to be looking into my mind or something. . . this is just excellent!! Superb as always, my fellow romantic. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
seems I cant sleep... perhaps a jer fixx is in order *smile* this ones even better at this time of night  your jm ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Yes, another great read, JML. Your bud kitkat |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~jerry and it is my honor to read another great piece from you. you truly are the romantic at heart...and you write with such intense passion and truth. an inspiration to us all i'd say. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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