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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When I saw your smile, smiling as the sun so bright, Time is right for love, When you touch me, An ocean whispers slowly When you love me, The wind blows, When you say you love me, I feel I am in heaven, I feel whole world is mine, When the time came to say goodbye, I felt so lost, Didn't know we have To leave that soon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Little VanDana~ 'When' I read your poetry .... I read your heart. Lovely, dear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A lovely poem! So sweet and sad....  |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Sighs, longing goodbyes. Kisses. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
so beautiful and sad at the same time. remembering the times we have together, is what carries us through the times we have to be apart. you captured your feelings wonderfully here and shared with all of us. thanks much! amy  < !signature-->~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great one, Vandana. Wonderful expression of an emotional trauma behind parting. Regards, Sudhir Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,everyone!!!! |
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