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Kissner
New Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-04-17 09:53 PM

Losing Love

I want to runaway,
I want to sit and cry,
I want to figure out just why,
This love so great has turned to a lie.

Let me go,
Let me know,
Why you've trapped me to control me so.

I give you my all,
Only to stand alone for the fall.
No comfort, no arms to hold,
Only anger and hate still yet to explode.

I wish I may,
and only dream that I might,
Take my life and end my loneliness tonight.

L. Kissner
Oct 12, 1999

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-18 02:35 AM

Raw, there Kissner. Glad I see you
wrote that in October, so I can feel
fairly safe that most that pain is over.

Lovely poem.

Thanks
netswan

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-04-18 02:40 AM

Kissner,
Hope that you are over this now. Nice writing!!! Looking forward to more.

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

3 posted 2000-04-18 02:35 PM

I hope that's only a dream.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-05-31 03:46 AM

The pain in this one is so beautifully expressed.
I hope things are good now.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-06-01 04:46 AM

Kiss~
Very painful and heart breaking. This brought back memories for me and I know what you are feeling, to feel like you are giving everything your every being and not recieving anything in return except heart ache and pain.
Ditch this one and try to start again and no one is worth ending your life for, no one.
Try to love once more and be happy

Hugs Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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