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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-05-31 05:27 PM


The Essence of You
Amy M. Kennedy

You revealed to me your heart
That's when this romance got its start
Flames of passion burning bright
An angels face came to me from within the light

Take my breath away, with your sweet kiss
Makes me feel nothing but sweet eternal bliss
In your arms forever I want to stay
Beside you in love is where my heart shall lay

Like a moth to the flame, I am consumed with desire
And my heart is full of love, and passion flares with fire
Doubt our love will ever fade or burn out
No in fact with you I'll always be...that there's no doubt

Like the mockingbird in the tree, your voice sings to me so sweet
I'll always cherish the summer nights and their intense heat
This is where we got our start, from here where we go I don't know
But I hope that our love always continues to grow
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"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-31-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-05-31 07:27 PM


me thinks you got it BAAAAADDDD!!
and its soooo GOOOOOODDDD!!    
beautiful poem girl...passion filled
later-love-gator
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2000-05-31 07:36 PM


Hang on tight and don't let go!  
It's so wonderful to have someone special to love,
if we were ALL only so lucky!
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 ~Sheri

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Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2000-05-31 09:04 PM


Ok Amy.....Details????

Marina

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-05-31 09:58 PM


Thanks everyone for your wonderful responses as always much appreciated. Marina sorry hon no details can be revealed at this time. i'll just simply say this is a new love and quite fragile.

take care
amy  

p.s. Janet love ya girl!

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-05-31 10:07 PM


Amy*
This is magnificent!! The images and the message..breathtaking!!  And now the mystery....lol   Thank you for sharing this!!

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2000-05-31 10:30 PM


Love those summer nights of intense heat
OK, we can wait for details.

You have written passion, my dear
Liz

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
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7 posted 2000-06-01 02:30 AM


Oh Amy, this is beautifully expressed and written.
Coco

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
8 posted 2000-06-01 05:03 AM


Amy~
A new love how wonderful   may all your dreams and hopes come true and your hearts always be filled with tremendous love for each other.
Love Tracie~
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 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




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lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
9 posted 2000-06-01 06:52 AM


Amy, this is so sweet and romantic.  It's very refreshing.  Good job!

Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
10 posted 2000-06-01 07:00 AM


This just draws you in like the beginning of a wonderful love story should ... well done Amy!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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