Open Poetry #7 |
The Essence of You |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
The Essence of You < !signature-->Amy M. Kennedy You revealed to me your heart That's when this romance got its start Flames of passion burning bright An angels face came to me from within the light Take my breath away, with your sweet kiss Makes me feel nothing but sweet eternal bliss In your arms forever I want to stay Beside you in love is where my heart shall lay Like a moth to the flame, I am consumed with desire And my heart is full of love, and passion flares with fire Doubt our love will ever fade or burn out No in fact with you I'll always be...that there's no doubt Like the mockingbird in the tree, your voice sings to me so sweet I'll always cherish the summer nights and their intense heat This is where we got our start, from here where we go I don't know But I hope that our love always continues to grow "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks you got it BAAAAADDDD!! and its soooo GOOOOOODDDD!! beautiful poem girl...passion filled later-love-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hang on tight and don't let go! It's so wonderful to have someone special to love, if we were ALL only so lucky! < !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ok Amy.....Details???? Marina |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thanks everyone for your wonderful responses as always much appreciated. Marina sorry hon no details can be revealed at this time. i'll just simply say this is a new love and quite fragile. take care amy p.s. Janet love ya girl! "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amy* This is magnificent!! The images and the message..breathtaking!! And now the mystery....lol Thank you for sharing this!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Love those summer nights of intense heat OK, we can wait for details. You have written passion, my dear Liz |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Amy, this is beautifully expressed and written. Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Amy~ A new love how wonderful may all your dreams and hopes come true and your hearts always be filled with tremendous love for each other. Love Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Amy, this is so sweet and romantic. It's very refreshing. Good job! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This just draws you in like the beginning of a wonderful love story should ... well done Amy! Best wishes, /Kit |
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