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desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 2000-04-27 10:15 PM

as the wind danced with her vibrant hair
and the moonlight sparkled in her eyes
my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes
her tanned skin so sleek and smooth
my body aches to feel her energy
to hold her electric body
as it's pulse creates a soothing harmony
oh her lips of absolute pleasure
to touch them would be a treasure
yet to kiss would fuel a wild fire
rivaled only by my hearts desire
and her vioce is as soft as a dream
covering my body with it's arrousing sound
so I'll close my eyes and wait once more
till the love of my life can be found...

"There were times in my life
when I was going insane
tryin to walk through
the pain
when I lost my grip
and I hit the floor
yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing"

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-27 11:08 PM

Desperado - this is well written -
I enjoyed it a lot.

netswan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-04-28 01:13 AM

Desperado~
This one has *sighs* written all over it.

'my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes'

What a unique poetic thought.
I sure enjoyed the read of this one.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-04-28 01:21 AM

WOW...
very cool poem!!
reads like a song even.
very good visual and emotional imagery.

"my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes"

very cool line
enjoyed the read
jm

Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~

kristi
Junior Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 33
Yulee, FL

4 posted 2000-04-28 02:22 AM

Great poem. If only all men were so passionate!

Two men look through the same bars. One sees the mud, and one the stars.-?

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

5 posted 2000-04-28 08:34 AM

Desperato, very nice. I enjoyed the read.

desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

6 posted 2000-04-30 02:24 PM

thanks for the comments guys. here I am sunday afternoon, sunburned and worn out, but the weekend was great. hehe thanks once again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-05-02 09:24 PM

hopefully you won't wait long

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