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Life (haiku)
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Life (haiku) |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
River of the past < !signature-->flows forward through the present, creates the future. jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent Haiku  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joanna~ Absolutely lovely. Perfectly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joanna, Great Haiku! INclan |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Of all the things... I think I figured this one out..! I surprized meself. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An excellent haiku on life! I look forward to more haikus by you. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Mountain standing proud~ In past,present and future~ True master of time! dear Joannak,in my humble opinion,i think that's the best haiku i have read from you....your talent fills me with delight! [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Thanks to all for reading. For Ruth, Marge, Denise, INclan, Melissa and kaile, I so enjoy reading all of your work. Kaile, I thank you greatly, I think this haiku is a start of a longer work for me, linking the past, present and the future. Hopefully I will complete it and be able to submit someday for your comments. Thanks again to all, Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
why thank me,Joannak...we budding haikuists must unite!!! ")  one or teo ideas for your poem maybe you can write about universal values that will always be close to our hearts no matter the era....values such as love,friendship,filial piety...... stuff that will never grow out of fashion....eg poetry,the art of reading,childhood playthings(though you can write about how though we still long for fun and entertainment,the stuff that captivates our attention are vastly different now) i will write more once i have the ideas ") |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Joannak, This is PERFECTION my dear, Cerenity |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend, may life always greet you with pleasant suprises and may your life run smoothly and clearly! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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