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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
I love you To share a meal for two by candlelight And simple soothing celtic melodies One calm and peaceful, quiet Summer's night Provides these nearly perfect remedies. The secrets of our love laid bare at last Sensations ever hidden now exposed, We love as perfect lovers, hard and fast As intimate as ever we supposed. And then her silken cheek against my breast We nestle warm and sheltered in our bed. Our legs entangled sweetly as we rest Contented in the joy our hearts have bred. As in the morrow's light I feel her near, I cherish her with feelings most severe. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH MAN...*SIGH* wow..you get me everytime with these... you write devotion divinely... love your sonnets... and btw...I've been doing some sonnet research, in hopes of writing one of these gems... and I printed out your "My Eyes"... it still gets to me everytime I read it... one of the best poems ever... just wanted to tell ya that...(smile) take care, jm Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Thanks Janet, I do appreciate yourr responses. It is nice to know these bring joy at times. David2  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Intoxicating, your words here...so lovely, so right. Thank you for this sensual, heart~filling gift of poetry, David. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
This is superb my friend. Wish I could write sonnets this well. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
What an inspiration, A true romantic find, This poem I have read, Is truely one of a kind!! So Romantic David!! I love romantic love sonnets! Beautiful!!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Beautiful writing David (as always) Roniece [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
David, just beautiful. This was so perfectly expressed, I really love your writing. Joanna< !signature--> What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury [This message has been edited by Joannak (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
David, your poetry makes me so sigh-filled with its soft and sensual loving words. Beautiful writing, sir! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
David, this is wonderful stuff, you are gifted in the sonnet I dare say. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Intensely romantic, David. corinne |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
David2 ------Whoa ------this was good. netswan |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Naturally, the title caught me, but the poem took me gently into my own thoughts and that was a beautiful place to bring me with your lovely words. Thank you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely sonnet, David! Very lovely! Denise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was fiery and passionate and loving....wonderful piece Kathleen |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's just wonderful to find a well written and finely crafted sonnet, on an age old theme, with a fresh delivery, by an intensely romantic man... This is great, David...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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